Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Are you more of a spontaneous or structured person? Is there a reason as to why you are such?
People are spontaneous when they are young, but they become more and more structured as they get older.
I am a very structured person now, so I often hate myself because I do not communicate well with young people.
As we get older and we experienced a lot and get educated, we become more and more structured.
So I try to live spontaneously so that we can communicate and hang out with young people.
We call too structured people “conservatives” in general.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son. ^^
I am a very structured person now, so I often hate myself because I do not communicate well with young people.
As we get older and we experienced a lot and get educated, we become more and more structured.
So I try to live spontaneously so that we can communicate and hang out with young people.
We call too structured people “conservatives” in general.
That\'s true!
It\'s the same thing in the Philippines.
I hope you live a great spontaneous life. ^^
~t. Ally
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People are spontaneous when they are young, but they become more and more structured as they get older.
>> CORRECT!
I am a very structured person now, so I often hate myself because I do not communicate well with young people.
>> CORRECT!
As we get older and we experienced a lot and get educated, we become more and more structured.
>> As we get older and we experience a lot and get educated, we become more and more structured.
So I try to live spontaneously so that we can communicate and hang out with young people.
>> CORRECT!
We call too structured people “conservatives” in general.
>> CORRECT!
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