Hi! Ally.
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What sport makes no sense to you? Why?
There are many sports that do not make sense to me, because there are many sports that I have not seen or heard before.
Sport, which has been done only in certain areas, is unfamiliar to us and difficult to try.
Among the sports that are globally common, swimming is a sport that makes no sense to me.
I know how to swim, but I have not learned to swim systematically.
Another is extreme sports, and now it makes no sense for me to challenge because I am old.
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Hi, sir Son. ^^
Sport, which has been done only in certain areas, is unfamiliar to us and difficult to try.
Among the sports that are globally common, swimming is a sport that makes no sense to me.
I know how to swim, but I have not learned to swim systematically.
Another is extreme sports, and now it makes no sense for me to challenge because I am old.
Your composition makes a lot of sense.
Thank you for sharing your insights! ^^
~t. Ally
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There are many sports that do not make sense to me, because there are many sports that I have not seen or heard before.
>> There are many sports that do not make sense to me, because there are many sports that I have not seen nor heard of before.
Sport, which has been done only in certain areas, is unfamiliar to us and difficult to try.
>> Sports that have been done only in certain areas is unfamiliar to us and difficult to try.
Among the sports that are globally common, swimming is a sport that makes no sense to me.
>> CORRECT!
I know how to swim, but I have not learned to swim systematically.
>> I know how to swim, but I have not learned how to swim systematically.
Another is extreme sports, and now it makes no sense for me to challenge because I am old.
>> CORRECT!
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