Hi! Ally.
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If you had the chance to choose a superpower, what would it be and why?
If a person has a chance to have superpowers, people will choose a variety of choices.
If I had a chance to have superpowers, first of all, I want to create a peaceful world without war.
The second is to create a society without crime and without accidents.
The third is to create a fair and just society.
But man cannot have superpowers because he is not a god, therefore there is joy, anger, sadness, and fun in the human world.
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Wow, yet another amazing composition. ^^
If I had a chance to have superpowers, first of all, I want to create a peaceful world without war.
The second is to create a society without crime and without accidents.
The third is to create a fair and just society.
But man cannot have superpowers because he is not a god, therefore there is joy, anger, sadness, and fun in the human world.
This is very philosophical!
Thank you for your effort!
~t. Ally
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If a person has a chance to have superpowers, people will choose a variety of choices.
>> CORRECT!
If I had a chance to have superpowers, first of all, I want to create a peaceful world without war.
>> CORRECT!
The second is to create a society without crime and without accidents.
>> CORRECT!
The third is to create a fair and just society.
>> CORRECT!
But man cannot have superpowers because he is not a god, therefore there is joy, anger, sadness, and fun in the human world.
>> CORRECT!
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