Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever seen pirated/ copied/ fake goods for sale? What are the easiest things to pirate and sell nowadays? Why do you think people continue to buy these?
I remember buying the pirated when I was in college, and the original was so expensive that the pirated was sold a lot.
Illegal copies are sins that should be eliminated.
I think the most common copy and sale of illegal copies is songs.
In software, illegal copying is considered game and computer software.
Illegal copies are overflowing in all areas, especially famous brands, where fakes are being made and sold extensively in all countries.
강사 첨삭
Yes, technology has truly made things a lot easier for piracy.
Illegal copies are sins that should be eliminated.
I think the most common copy and sale of illegal copies is songs.
In software, illegal copying is considered game and computer software.
Illegal copies are overflowing in all areas, especially famous brands, where fakes are being made and sold extensively in all countries.
Thank you for sharing your story, sir Son. ^^
~t. Ally
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I remember buying the pirated when I was in college, and the original was so expensive that the pirated was sold a lot.
>> I remember buying something that has been pirated when I was in college, because the original one was so expensive, that the pirated one was sold a lot.
Illegal copies are sins that should be eliminated.
>> CORRECT!
I think the most common copy and sale of illegal copies is songs.
>> I think the most commonly copied and illegally sold are of songs.
In software, illegal copying is considered game and computer software.
>> In software, they illegally copy games and other computer software.
Illegal copies are overflowing in all areas, especially famous brands, where fakes are being made and sold extensively in all countries.
>> Illegal copies are overflowing in all areas, especially famous brands, from which fakes are being made and sold extensively in all countries.
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