Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
If you had the chance to leave Korea and work, study or retire in another country, would you take that chance? Which country would you choose and why?
If I had the chance to leave Korea and work, study or retire in another country, I want to study, work and retire in Northern Europe.
Northern Europe has a good natural environment, good personality, and the welfare system is best on the planet.
It is also easily connected to all regions including Europe, Russia, and America.
In Northern Europe, you can see aurora at night, and it is difficult to see auroras caused by the interaction between electromagnetic waves emitted from the sun and the air of the earth.
I hope to live in Australia or Northern Europe again, because the natural environment is so good, Korea is so disgusted by the fine dusts these days.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Son!
Northern Europe has a good natural environment, good personality, and the welfare system is best on the planet.
It is also easily connected to all regions including Europe, Russia, and America.
In Northern Europe, you can see aurora at night, and it is difficult to see auroras caused by the interaction between electromagnetic waves emitted from the sun and the air of the earth.
I hope to live in Australia or Northern Europe again, because the natural environment is so good, Korea is so disgusted by the fine dusts these days.
That sounds like a wonderful place to stay in. ^^
Happy New Year!
~t. Ally
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If I had the chance to leave Korea and work, study or retire in another country, I want to study, work and retire in Northern Europe.
>> CORRECT!
Northern Europe has a good natural environment, good personality, and the welfare system is best on the planet.
>> Northern Europe has a good natural environment, people have good personalities, and the welfare system is best on the planet.
It is also easily connected to all regions including Europe, Russia, and America.
>> CORRECT!
In Northern Europe, you can see aurora at night, and it is difficult to see auroras caused by the interaction between electromagnetic waves emitted from the sun and the air of the earth.
>> CORRECT!
I hope to live in Australia or Northern Europe again, because the natural environment is so good, Korea is so disgusted by the fine dusts these days.
>> I hope to live in Australia or Northern Europe again, because the natural environment is so good, Korea is so disgusting because of the fine dust these days.
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