Hi, Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you like to achieve in the year 2020?
I retire at the end of February 2020, and by March I begin the second act of my life again.
So I want to do a lot of things that I’ve put off so far.
First, I want to put on a backpack and travel around the world.
Second, I want to read the book I wanted to see and take care of my own health.
Finally, I want to devote myself to my family.
강사 첨삭
Such a wonderful plan, sir Son. ^^
So I want to do a lot of things that I’ve put off so far.
First, I want to put on a backpack and travel around the world.
Second, I want to read the book I wanted to see and take care of my own health.
Finally, I want to devote myself to my family.
Thank you for sharing this with me.
See you next week!
~t. Ally
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I retire at the end of February 2020, and by March I begin the second act of my life again.
>>I will be retiring at the end of February 2020, and by March, I will begin the second chapter of my life.
So I want to do a lot of things that I’ve put off so far.
>> So I want to do a lot of things that I\'ve put off for a long time.
First, I want to put on a backpack and travel around the world.
>> CORRECT!
Second, I want to read the book I wanted to see and take care of my own health.
>> CORRECT!
Finally, I want to devote myself to my family.
>> CORRECT!
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