Hi, Ally,

2020-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What do you think is the biggest issue between China and Korea? How is it affecting you as citizens? The biggest issue between China and South Korea is North Korea in recent years. South Korea is in a very subtle position that neither agrees nor disagrees with US policy. It is also subtle to stand in China\'s position on the national interests of the United States and China, because our trade relations depend too much on the United States and China. Korea\'s largest import and export countries are China and the United States, so it is very subtle to stand in the middle of China and the United States. China and Korea have long been in love and hatred. So, I think that no matter what inconveniences are present, I should solve it wisely and always get along well.

강사 첨삭

Hi, sir Son. ^^ 

Ah yes, that really is a deep issue that we won\'t be able to solve immediately.
It is also very unfortunate that the people of South Korea are affected in a very negative way because of this situation. 


~t. Ally



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The biggest issue between China and South Korea is North Korea in recent years.
>> The biggest issue between China and South Korea in the recent years is North Korea.

South Korea is in a very subtle position that neither agrees nor disagrees with US policy.
>> South Korea is in a very subtle position that neither agrees nor disagrees with the US policy.

It is also subtle to stand in China\'s position on the national interests of the United States and China, because our trade relations depend too much on the United States and China.
>> CORRECT! Or you may also want to use the word discreet instead of subtle. ^^

Korea\'s largest import and export countries are China and the United States, so it is very subtle to stand in the middle of China and the United States.
>> Korea\'s largest import and export countries are China and the United States, so it is very discreet when it comes to its stand between China and the United States.

China and Korea have long been in love and hatred.
>> CORRECT!

So, I think that no matter what inconveniences are present, I should solve it wisely and always get along well.
>> So, I think that no matter what inconveniences are present, we should solve it wisely and always get along well.

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