Hi! Ally.
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What are the challenges of becoming a principal? Explain your answer.
I think that the most important thing to be a principal is to serve first.
These days, students lack a lot of ability to do their own work, and they are personal.
I think the principal of the school should be an example of teachers and students, so I have to master all the curriculum of the school.
If the principal is respected by the students, the school is very well operated.
I think it is the role of the principal to make the school run well by becoming a trinity of students, teachers and parents.
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Hi, Son. ^^
I think the principal of the school should be an example of teachers and students, so I have to master all the curriculum of the school.
If the principal is respected by the students, the school is very well operated.
I think it is the role of the principal to make the school run well by becoming a trinity of students, teachers and parents.
I believe that your work is so amazing.
You get to inspire so many people. ^^
Thank you for sending this composition. ^^
~t. Ally
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I think that the most important thing to be a principal is to serve first.
>> I think that the most important thing about being a principal is to serve first.
These days, students lack a lot of ability to do their own work, and they are personal.
>> CORRECT!
I think the principal of the school should be an example of teachers and students, so I have to master all the curriculum of the school.
>> CORRECT!
If the principal is respected by the students, the school is very well operated.
>> CORRECT!
I think it is the role of the principal to make the school run well by becoming a trinity of students, teachers and parents.
>> I think it is the role of the principal to make the school run well by uniting a trinity of students, teachers and parents.
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