Hi!, Ally.
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What is the perfect color that describes you as a person? Why do you think so?
I don\'t know what color means, here it seems to ask what kind of person I am.
I seem to have become conservative as I get older.
I think my color is slightly different depending on each issue rather than being conservative in every way, but overall it is conservative.
I think it is good to be conservative in the field of education, it is important to learn new discipline, but personality education is more important.
Students\' human rights are important, but the teacher\'s authority is also important, and the respect for adults should be given priority over other things.
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Hi. ^^
I seem to have become conservative as I get older.
I think my color is slightly different depending on each issue rather than being conservative in every way, but overall it is conservative.
I think it is good to be conservative in the field of education, it is important to learn new discipline, but personality education is more important.
Students\' human rights are important, but the teacher\'s authority is also important, and the respect for adults should be given priority over other things.
Color, in this context, means the actual color ( red, blue, orange ) that would represent you.
Here\'s an example:
The color that describes me is the color yellow.
Because I am a jolly and energetic person, which is what the color yellow represents.
But you are right about the part about describing your personality.
Good job. ^^
~t. Ally
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I don\'t know what color means, here it seems to ask what kind of person I am.
>> I don\'t know what color means here, but it seems like you are asking me about what kind of person I am.
I seem to have become conservative as I get older.
>> I seem to have become more conservative as I got older.
I think my color is slightly different depending on each issue rather than being conservative in every way, but overall it is conservative.
>> CORRECT!
I think it is good to be conservative in the field of education, it is important to learn new discipline, but personality education is more important.
>> CORRECT!
Students\' human rights are important, but the teacher\'s authority is also important, and the respect for adults should be given priority over other things.
>> CORRECT!
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