Hi, Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you feel comfortable talking to strangers? Why or why not?
I\'m not comfortable talking to strangers, I think I\'m a little introverted.
As I get older, I think I should be good with people around me and with people I have never seen before.
But it’s uncomfortable to talk to someone you’ve never seen before, because new things are always burdensome.
I think that when I get older, I should be close to all the people around me, but it is difficult to practice it by action.
I’ll have to start by talking before anyone else speaks to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son. ^^
As I get older, I think I should be good with people around me and with people I have never seen before.
But it’s uncomfortable to talk to someone you’ve never seen before, because new things are always burdensome.
I think that when I get older, I should be close to all the people around me, but it is difficult to practice it by action.
I’ll have to start by talking before anyone else speaks to me.
That\'s true!
Thank you for making your composition consistently. ^^
~t. Ally
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I\'m not comfortable talking to strangers, I think I\'m a little introverted.
>> CORRECT!
As I get older, I think I should be good with people around me and with people I have never seen before.
>> CORRECT!
But it’s uncomfortable to talk to someone you’ve never seen before, because new things are always burdensome.
>>CORRECT!
I think that when I get older, I should be close to all the people around me, but it is difficult to practice it by action.
>> CORRECT!
I’ll have to start by talking before anyone else speaks to me.
>> CORRECT!
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