Hi, Ally.
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Is it easy for you to trust people? Why or why not?
I believe in people very easily, because if I believe in the other person, we become comfortable with each other.
If I do not believe in the other person, there will be distrust in everything and things will not go smoothly.
I want to live as comfortable as possible, I think that we should trust each other in order to do so, society that does not trust each other is tired and stressful.
Sometimes we are betrayed by believers, but after a while, when we know why we are betrayed, we often understand why we are betrayed.
I hope that our society will become a trustworthy society.
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I agree with you on that, sir Son. ^^
If I do not believe in the other person, there will be distrust in everything and things will not go smoothly.
I want to live as comfortable as possible, I think that we should trust each other in order to do so, society that does not trust each other is tired and stressful.
Sometimes we are betrayed by believers, but after a while, when we know why we are betrayed, we often understand why we are betrayed.
I hope that our society will become a trustworthy society.
Thank you for sending a great composition.
~t. Ally
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I believe in people very easily, because if I believe in the other person, we become comfortable with each other.
>> CORRECT!
If I do not believe in the other person, there will be distrust in everything and things will not go smoothly.
>> CORRECT!
I want to live as comfortable as possible, I think that we should trust each other in order to do so, society that does not trust each other is tired and stressful.
>> I want to live as comfortable as possible, I think that we should trust each other in order to do so, a society that does not trust each other is tiring and stressful.
Sometimes we are betrayed by believers, but after a while, when we know why we are betrayed, we often understand why we are betrayed.
>> CORRECT!
I hope that our society will become a trustworthy society.
>> CORRECT!
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