Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe a fashion trend in Korea that you would never wear? Why?
I do not know what the current fashion trend in Korea is.
The fashion trend of a young man is not suitable for us, so I can not follow it further, especially when it is clothes.
I am especially ignorant of fashion, and I wear clothes according to my style.
There are many things that our older generation does not understand at all, such as what they think, food, and style of clothing.
I think that the older generation should try to understand not only clothes but also the trends of young people.
강사 첨삭
Hi, sir Son. ^^
The fashion trend of a young man is not suitable for us, so I can not follow it further, especially when it is clothes.
I am especially ignorant of fashion, and I wear clothes according to my style.
There are many things that our older generation does not understand at all, such as what they think, food, and style of clothing.
I think that the older generation should try to understand not only clothes but also the trends of young people.
Embrace your own sense of fashion. ^^
Thank you for sharing!
~t. Ally
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I do not know what the current fashion trend in Korea is.
>> CORRECT!
The fashion trend of a young man is not suitable for us, so I can not follow it further, especially when it is clothes.
>> The fashion trend of a young man is not suitable for us, so I cannot follow it further, especially when it is about clothes.
I am especially ignorant of fashion, and I wear clothes according to my style.
>> I am especially ignorant in fashion, and I wear clothes according to my style.
There are many things that our older generation does not understand at all, such as what they think, food, and style of clothing.
>> There are many things that our older generation do not understand at all, such as what they think, the food they eat, and their style of clothing.
I think that the older generation should try to understand not only clothes but also the trends of young people.
>> CORRECT!
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