Hi! Ally.

2020-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Describe yourself using 8 sentences. It is really hard to express myself simply. It is you who knows you best, so it is really harder to express yourself. I think that everyone has duality, this personality and that personality. I think I have a dull head first, because I can hardly hear English conversation even if I try hard. Second, I don\'t seem to be bad at machines and electronics, and no matter how well I try to handle them, they don\'t work. My advantages are being sincere, and doing everything I can to do anything. I think I have a strong sense of responsibility for my family and my work. Finally, I like to hang out with friends and think I try a lot to understand people around me.

강사 첨삭

Very well done. ^^ 
Thank you, Son!



~t. Ally



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It is really hard to express myself simply.
>> CORRECT!

It is you who knows you best, so it is really harder to express yourself.
>> CORRECT!

I think that everyone has duality, this personality and that personality.
>> CORRECT!

I think I have a dull head first, because I can hardly hear English conversation even if I try hard.
>> I\'ve been thinking that I have a dull head in the beginning, because I can hardly understand English conversation even if I try hard.

Second, I don\'t seem to be bad at machines and electronics, and no matter how well I try to handle them, they don\'t work.
>>CORRECT!

My advantages are being sincere, and doing everything I can to do anything.
>> CORRECT!

I think I have a strong sense of responsibility for my family and my work.
>> CORRECT!

Finally, I like to hang out with friends and think I try a lot to understand people around me.
>> CORRECT!

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