Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe yourself using 8 sentences.
It is really hard to express myself simply.
It is you who knows you best, so it is really harder to express yourself.
I think that everyone has duality, this personality and that personality.
I think I have a dull head first, because I can hardly hear English conversation even if I try hard.
Second, I don\'t seem to be bad at machines and electronics, and no matter how well I try to handle them, they don\'t work.
My advantages are being sincere, and doing everything I can to do anything.
I think I have a strong sense of responsibility for my family and my work.
Finally, I like to hang out with friends and think I try a lot to understand people around me.
강사 첨삭
Very well done. ^^
It is you who knows you best, so it is really harder to express yourself.
I think that everyone has duality, this personality and that personality.
I think I have a dull head first, because I can hardly hear English conversation even if I try hard.
Second, I don\'t seem to be bad at machines and electronics, and no matter how well I try to handle them, they don\'t work.
My advantages are being sincere, and doing everything I can to do anything.
I think I have a strong sense of responsibility for my family and my work.
Finally, I like to hang out with friends and think I try a lot to understand people around me.
Thank you, Son!
~t. Ally
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It is really hard to express myself simply.
>> CORRECT!
It is you who knows you best, so it is really harder to express yourself.
>> CORRECT!
I think that everyone has duality, this personality and that personality.
>> CORRECT!
I think I have a dull head first, because I can hardly hear English conversation even if I try hard.
>> I\'ve been thinking that I have a dull head in the beginning, because I can hardly understand English conversation even if I try hard.
Second, I don\'t seem to be bad at machines and electronics, and no matter how well I try to handle them, they don\'t work.
>>CORRECT!
My advantages are being sincere, and doing everything I can to do anything.
>> CORRECT!
I think I have a strong sense of responsibility for my family and my work.
>> CORRECT!
Finally, I like to hang out with friends and think I try a lot to understand people around me.
>> CORRECT!
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