Hi! Ally.

2020-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Tell me a valuable lesson your grandparents taught you. Are you able to apply it to your life today? I don’t remember much about grandparents, just a faint memory of their faces. My grandparents didn’t live with us, so I saw them sometimes as children and died early. It was just that my memories of my grandparents were very frugal. So I try to live frugally on the one hand, but nowadays consumption is a virtue, so I can not live like that. I think that the world where grandparents lived and the present situation have changed, so I should live in that age.

강사 첨삭

I agree! ^^

We should live according to our present and not that of our past.

But some values are also timeless, and those should be applied until the end of time.

~t. Ally

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I don’t remember much about grandparents, just a faint memory of their faces.

>> I don\'t remember much about my grandparents, just a faint memory of their faces.

My grandparents didn’t live with us, so I saw them sometimes as children and died early.

>> My grandparents didn\'t live with us, so I only saw them when I was a child, and they passed away at an early age.

It was just that my memories of my grandparents were very frugal.

>> I do remember my grandparents as very frugal people.

So I try to live frugally on the one hand, but nowadays consumption is a virtue, so I can not live like that.

>> So I try to live frugally on the one hand, but nowadays consumption is a virtue, so I cannot live like that anymore.

I think that the world where grandparents lived and the present situation have changed, so I should live in that age.

>> I think that the world in which our grandparents lived and the present world has changed, so I should live in the present.

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