Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever met a person who is a pain in the neck? What did you do to that person?
When we live, we meet a person who is a pain in the neck.
The more we experience how we deal with a pain in the neck, the more we have our skills.
I try to solve it smoothly without colliding as possible when I meet a pain in the neck.
In our society, we can not live without conflicts between each other, but we must solve the conflict wisely.
I do not think I can ignore a person who is a pain in the neck around us, and I think I must solve it wisely.
강사 첨삭
I think you are a very sensible man, sir Son. ^^
The more we experience how we deal with a pain in the neck, the more we have our skills.
I try to solve it smoothly without colliding as possible when I meet a pain in the neck.
In our society, we can not live without conflicts between each other, but we must solve the conflict wisely.
I do not think I can ignore a person who is a pain in the neck around us, and I think I must solve it wisely.
Thank you for your honesty.
~t.Ally
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When we live, we meet a person who is a pain in the neck.
>> In our lifetimes, we will always meet a person who is a pain in the neck.
The more we experience how we deal with a pain in the neck, the more we have our skills.
>> The more experiences we have about dealing with people who are a pain in the neck, the more skills we gain.
I try to solve it smoothly without colliding as possible when I meet a pain in the neck.
>> I try to solve it smoothly without colliding as much as possible when I meet a pain in the neck.
In our society, we can not live without conflicts between each other, but we must solve the conflict wisely.
>> CORRECT!
I do not think I can ignore a person who is a pain in the neck around us, and I think I must solve it wisely.
>> CORRECT!
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