Hi!, Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Give me 3 ways on how we can prevent getting infected by the Coronavirus.
In Korea, it is very confusing because of Coronavirus, which is probably a global phenomenon.
Perhaps the world is in horror because the vaccine against Coronavirus has not been developed.
I think there will be many infectious diseases against this type of strain virus in the future.
When we are healthy, even if these viruses enter, we are not infected.
First, I think it is important to be healthy, second, to mask the virus so it does not enter our body, to wash our hands all the time, and to forbid the gathering of many people.
강사 첨삭
This is very factual.
Unfortunately, as time goes, I\'m sure more viruses will mutate, and it will be more difficult to combat them.
I hope we will be healthy enough to fight these viruses in the future.
~t. Ally
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In Korea, it is very confusing because of Coronavirus, which is probably a global phenomenon.
>> In Korea, it is very confusing because of the Coronavirus, which is probably a global phenomenon.
Perhaps the world is in horror because the vaccine against Coronavirus has not been developed.
>> Perhaps the world is in horror because the vaccine against the Coronavirus has not been developed yet.
I think there will be many infectious diseases against this type of strain virus in the future.
>> I think there will be many infectious diseases like this type of strain virus in the future.
When we are healthy, even if these viruses enter, we are not infected.
>> If we are healthy, even if these viruses enter our bodies, we will not be infected.
First, I think it is important to be healthy, second, to mask the virus so it does not enter our body, to wash our hands all the time, and to forbid the gathering of many people.
>> First, I think it is important to be healthy, second, to wear a mask so that the virus does not enter our body, to wash our hands all the time, and to forbid people from gathering in a big crowd.
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