Hi!, Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Who is the most down-to-earth person you know? Tell me his or her characteristics. Use 7 sentences.
Although I am not a person I am directly familiar with, the founder of LG Group in Korea is a very rich but always frugal and kind, in short, down-to-earth person.
So he is well respected in Korea.
LG Group has the largest share of premium TVs, washing machines and air conditioners worldwide.
In his later years, he inherited the company to his son and farmed on his home farm.
There are many people around me, both good-mannered and always humble and kind.
I hate the kind of person who changes personality when I become rich, and these people eventually lose money and lose friends and family.
A person with a good personality will gather friends around him and eventually get money, we call him down-to-earth person.
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Wow!
So he is well respected in Korea.
LG Group has the largest share of premium TVs, washing machines and air conditioners worldwide.
In his later years, he inherited the company to his son and farmed on his home farm.
There are many people around me, both good-mannered and always humble and kind.
I hate the kind of person who changes personality when I become rich, and these people eventually lose money and lose friends and family.
A person with a good personality will gather friends around him and eventually get money, we call him down-to-earth person.
I believe only a handful of people who get to that level of richness remain kind and down to earth.
I\'m glad he is one of them. ^^
~t. Ally
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Although I am not a person I am directly familiar with, the founder of LG Group in Korea is a very rich but always frugal and kind, in short, down-to-earth person.
>> Although he is not a person that I am directly familiar with, the founder of LG Group in Korea is a very rich, yet frugal and kind person. In short, he is down to earth.
So he is well respected in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
LG Group has the largest share of premium TVs, washing machines and air conditioners worldwide.
>> CORRECT!
In his later years, he inherited the company to his son and farmed on his home farm.
>> In his latter years, he passed on the company to his son and farmed in his own farm.
There are many people around me, both good-mannered and always humble and kind.
>> CORRECT!
I hate the kind of person who changes personality when I become rich, and these people eventually lose money and lose friends and family.
>> I hate the kind of person who change their personalities when they become rich, and these people eventually lose money and lose their friends and family.
A person with a good personality will gather friends around him and eventually get money, we call him down-to-earth person.
>> A person with a good personality will gather friends around him and eventually get money, we call him a down-to-earth person.
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