Hi! Ally.

2020-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Tell me your thoughts about people who are hoarding or selling (at a higher price), face masks and sanitizers because of the coronavirus outbreak? What should be done to these people? In any time, anywhere, there was a person who pursued his interests by using a difficult environment in the world. But I think profit-seeking should always be justified. It is mean to pursue profits using the weaknesses and difficult environments of the other party, and someday he is retaliated. When the world is dizzy and difficult, it is a principle to help and live with each other, and a humanist principle. If we experience difficulties together, we can see the true image of the person, a friend in a difficult time is a true friend.

강사 첨삭

This is well said. ^^ 

Thank you, Sir Son. 
You did well.
And I completely agree with your words.
I hope people learn how to have respect for each other, especially during tough times.


~t. Ally


--------------------------------

In any time, anywhere, there was a person who pursued his interests by using a difficult environment in the world.
>> In any time, anywhere, there was a person who pursued his interests by using a difficult situation in the world.

But I think profit-seeking should always be justified.
>> CORRECT!

It is mean to pursue profits using the weaknesses and difficult environments of the other party, and someday he is retaliated.
>> It is mean to pursue profits using the weaknesses and difficult situations of the other party, and someday this person will receive karma.

When the world is dizzy and difficult, it is a principle to help and live with each other, and a humanist principle.
>> When the world is in panic and chaos, it is a principle to help and live with each other, and a humanistic principle.

If we experience difficulties together, we can see the true image of the person, a friend in a difficult time is a true friend.
>> When we experience difficulties together, we can see the true image of the person, a friend in a difficult time is a true friend.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·