Hi! Ally.
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How do you keep your wallet and other valuables safe while you are swimming?
I usually leave my wallet or valuables in the car during swimming.
When I don’t take my car, I put it in the locker and swim.
Usually I don\'t take my wallet or valuables when I go to a swimming pool or a public bath.
I think that losing a wallet or valuables is just my responsibility for keeping it wrong.
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Hi, Son. ^^
When I don’t take my car, I put it in the locker and swim.
Usually I don\'t take my wallet or valuables when I go to a swimming pool or a public bath.
I think that losing a wallet or valuables is just my responsibility for keeping it wrong.
Thank you so much for this.
I think these are very good tactics. ^^
~t. Ally
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I usually leave my wallet or valuables in the car during swimming.
>> CORRECT!
When I don’t take my car, I put it in the locker and swim.
Usually I don\'t take my wallet or valuables when I go to a swimming pool or a public bath.
>> CORRECT!
I think that losing a wallet or valuables is just my responsibility for keeping it wrong.
>> I think that losing a wallet or valuables is just my consequence for not keeping it well.
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