Hi! Ally.
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think that those who own and run casinos are criminals or conmen?
I think that owning and running a casino is a kind of business.
I never think of such a person as a criminal or a conmen.
I think that casino operators are a business that makes money by using this psychology because everyone has a psychology that wants luck inside.
And the person who uses the casino or lottery is one way to relieve stress through this.
강사 첨삭
Yes, that is quite true.
I never think of such a person as a criminal or a conmen.
I think that casino operators are a business that makes money by using this psychology because everyone has a psychology that wants luck inside.
And the person who uses the casino or lottery is one way to relieve stress through this.
As long as it doesn\'t become an addiction, and they don\'t get into bad situations, I think it\'s fine for people to patronize such places. ^^
~t. Ally
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I think that owning and running a casino is a kind of business.
>> CORRECT!
I never think of such a person as a criminal or a conmen.
>> CORRECT!
I think that casino operators are a business that makes money by using this psychology because everyone has a psychology that wants luck inside.
>> I think that casino operators are businesses that make money by using this psychology because everyone has a thought process that wants to make them win at something.
And the person who uses the casino or lottery is one way to relieve stress through this.
>> And the person who uses the casino or lottery is one way to relieve stress.
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