Hi! Ally.
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Give me 3 qualities of a good friend.
I think the first condition of a good friend is honesty, because friends have to be honest with each other.
Second, I think that the condition of a good friend is faith, because friends have friendship on faith.
Finally, good friends think they should have a warm heart to understand each other.
If these three exist among friends, they become eternal friends.
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Beautifully done! ^^
~t. Ally
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I think the first condition of a good friend is honesty, because friends have to be honest with each other.
>> CORRECT!
Second, I think that the condition of a good friend is faith, because friends have friendship on faith.
Second, I think that the condition of a good friend is faith, because friends have friendship on faith.
>> CORRECT!
Finally, good friends think they should have a warm heart to understand each other.
Finally, good friends think they should have a warm heart to understand each other.
>> CORRECT!
If these three exist among friends, they become eternal friends.
If these three exist among friends, they become eternal friends.
>>CORRECT!
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