Hi! Ally.

2020-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Is it better to go backpacking alone or with friends? I\'d rather go backpacking with my friends, of course. The advantage of going backpacking with a friend is not boring, and it will not be lonely, and it will be very convenient. The downside, there will be occasional disagreements between each other, but that\'s a tiny bit of it. I am also looking for a friend to backpack with.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Sir Son. ^^

I hope your dream of backpacking around the world will come true someday. ^^ 
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. 


~t. Ally


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I\'d rather go backpacking with my friends, of course.
>> CORRECT!

The advantage of going backpacking with a friend is not boring, and it will not be lonely, and it will be very convenient.
>> The advantages of going backpacking with a friend is, it will not be boring, it will not be lonely, and it will be very convenient.

The downside, there will be occasional disagreements between each other, but that\'s a tiny bit of it.
>> CORRECT!

I am also looking for a friend to backpack with.
>> CORRECT!

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