Hi! Ally.
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How would the world be different if we never considered beauty?
If we do not pursue beauty, this society will probably be a world without any development and meaningless.
I think that people are basically going to pursue beauty, which is external or internal.
I think it is important to pursue the inner beauty, but I think that the external beauty should be pursued together.
If people don\'t pursue beauty, it will look so ugly, so people have always pursued beauty since ancient times.
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Yes, I agree. ^^
I think it is important to pursue the inner beauty, but I think that the external beauty should be pursued together.
If people don\'t pursue beauty, it will look so ugly, so people have always pursued beauty since ancient times.
People do look for beauty wherever they go.
Life without it will just be bland. ~
`t. Ally
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If we do not pursue beauty, this society will probably be a world without any development and meaningless.
>> If we do not pursue beauty, this society will probably be a world without any development and meaninglessness.
I think that people are basically going to pursue beauty, which is external or internal.
>> CORRECT!
I think it is important to pursue the inner beauty, but I think that the external beauty should be pursued together.
>> I think it is important to pursue inner beauty, but I also think that external beauty should be pursued as well.
If people don\'t pursue beauty, it will look so ugly, so people have always pursued beauty since ancient times.
>> CORRECT!
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