Hi, Ally! Long time no talk.

2019-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Happiness is a choice Happiness is a choice. I agree. Happiness, joy, pain, sorrow, hate, etc. exist in the world. However, depending on what we want to hear, we only hear what we want. For example, if we listen to music, it sounds sad if I am sad, and if I choose happiness, I will choose happy songs and songs will sound happy. So we all want to live happily if we can.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!


I understand why you were unable to do your homework for the past couple of days. ^^

You were on a school field trip.

And I\'m glad you enjoyed!

This is beautiful! ^^

I am speechless.

Thank you for this wonderful composition!

Please continue to spread happiness to all the people in your life. ^^


~~t. Ally



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Happiness is a choice. I agree.

>> CORRECT!


 Happiness, joy, pain, sorrow, hate, etc. exist in the world.

>> CORRECT!


 However, depending on what we want to hear, we only hear what we want. 

>> CORRECT!


 For example, if we listen to music, it sounds sad if I am sad, and if I choose happiness, I will choose happy songs and songs will sound happy. 

>> An example would be when we listen to music. If I feel sad, then the music will sound sad as well. If I choose to be happy, the music will also sound happy.
 

So we all want to live happily if we can.

 >> So we all want to live happily, as much as we can.



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