Hi, Ally! Long time no talk.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
I understand why you were unable to do your homework for the past couple of days. ^^
You were on a school field trip.
And I\'m glad you enjoyed!
This is beautiful! ^^
I am speechless.
Thank you for this wonderful composition!
Please continue to spread happiness to all the people in your life. ^^
~~t. Ally
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Happiness is a choice. I agree.
>> CORRECT!
Happiness, joy, pain, sorrow, hate, etc. exist in the world.
>> CORRECT!
However, depending on what we want to hear, we only hear what we want.
>> CORRECT!
For example, if we listen to music, it sounds sad if I am sad, and if I choose happiness, I will choose happy songs and songs will sound happy.
>> An example would be when we listen to music. If I feel sad, then the music will sound sad as well. If I choose to be happy, the music will also sound happy.
So we all want to live happily if we can.
>> So we all want to live happily, as much as we can.
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