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HOMEWORK:
What do you use frequently do whensome does something bad to you?
I seem to have responded in the same way as I was young.
However, as I get older, I seem to have solved the problem after finding out why they did such a bad thing to me.
Gradually, I seem to have solved the problem rationally.
There is a proverb that patience is winning,
It is also one way to wait for people to realize their own mistakes.
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Hello, Mr. [Name]. I appreciate you doing your homework. Keep it up! Here are the corrections I made on it.
>>> What do you frequently do when someone does something bad to you?
I seem to have responded in the same way as I was young.
>>> I seem to respond the same way as I used to when I was young.
However, as I get older, I seem to have solved the problem after finding out why they did such a
bad thing to me.
>>> However, as I got older, I seem to realize the problem and I found out why they did such a bad thing to me.
>>> However, as I got older, I seem to realize the problem and I found out why they did such a bad thing to me.
Gradually, I seem to have solved the problem rationally.
>>> Gradually, I seem to view the problem rationally.
There is a proverb that patience is winning,
>>> There is a proverb saying that \"Patience is winning.\"
It is also one way to wait for people to realize their own mistakes.
>>> It means to be patient with people and wait for them to realize their own mistakes.
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