HI AMBER

2012-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 amber

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I have not been doing homework for a long time. Actually i have enough time to write that, but i havent invited this page since i was laze and lost interest in english lately. Except for 15minutes in class, i am in the office all day and nobody speaks english. If i got the stress from english, i would study more. Anyway, i am anwsering the questions about homework. 1.c 2.e 3.b 4.c 5.e I have a qustion. i dont understand no.3 sentence;I'd be better off stopping my legal job and doing jobs for cash. The ___ is the only way to make money these days. What dose mean off stopping? I hope you spent a nice weekend with family. See you in the class.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for completing your homework and sending your composition. I do understand how you feel, sometimes I also feel the same way. I also experienced when I am loosing my interest to something. But don\'t give up. Perhaps you can think of another way to talk to someone in English. Maybe you can joke with your co-workers using English. If I can help you don\'t hesitate to ask. By the way the phrase should be \"better off\" and not \"off stopping\" . The phrase \"better off\" means is a better or more prosperous condition. Example :1.)  It would be better off taking the train instead of driving. 2.) I felt better off after the rise in stock prices. See you in our class! Have a nice day!

T. Amber

I have not been doing homework for a long time.

>>CORRECT

Actually i have enough time to write that, but i havent invited this page since i was laze and lost interest in english lately.

>>Actually I have enough time to write, but I haven\'t invited this page because I was lazy and I am loosing my interest in English lately.

Except for 15minutes in class, i am in the office all day and nobody speaks english.

>>Except for 15 minutes in class, I am in the office all day and nobody speaks English.

If i got the stress from english, i would study more.

>>If I am stressed in English, I will study more.    OR

>>If I am pressured in English I will study more.

 Anyway, i am anwsering the questions about homework.

>>Anyway, I am answering my homework.   OR

>>Anyway, I am answering the questions from my homework.

1.c

>>CORRECT

2.e

>>CORRECT

3.b

>>3. d

4.c

>>CORRECT

5.e

>>CORRECT
I have a qustion.

>>I have a question.

i dont understand no.3 sentence;

>> I don\'t understand sentence number 3.

I\'d be better off stopping my legal job and doing jobs for cash. The ___ is the only way to make money these days.

>>CORRECT
What dose mean off stopping?
>>What does \"off stopping\" means?
I hope you spent a nice weekend with family. See you in the class.

>>I hope you spend a nice weekend with your family. See you in our class.

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