Hi ANNE.

Hi there! Anne. Did you have a sweet dream last night? I'm sorry about my unconcentration on our class yesterday. Because I have no MBA class in every Thursday, so then co-workers usually make a promise together for dinner. Finally I was drunken. After dinner we went to song room in Gangnam, and then we had a time enjoyful. Maybe I remembered sing a song "Gangnam style" because I like PSY. Okay. I am going to continue talking about experience in NewYork. I had arrived at homestay about 9 o'clock p.m My room I would stay in homestay was decided by monster second floors. I unpacked my materials which would be used in my room. Monster called me to go down to kichen in fist floor. she and I sat on the table face to face, there was a map which was decribed method of going to Adelphi University in NewYork. She started to teach me about that, I saw outside through window on accident, There were snowing so calmly. See you Anne.

Hello there!

I hope that you are not suffering from a hangover now  because you went drinking last night. ^^

Thank you for this composition and for continuing your story about your experience in the US.

Here are the corrections I made for you.

-- Teacher Anne ^^ --

Hi there! Anne.

>>Correct.

Did you have a sweet dream last night?
>>Correct.

I\'m sorry about my unconcentration on our class yesterday.
>>I\'m sorry about my non-concentration on our class yesterday.

Because I have no MBA class in every Thursday, so then co-workers usually make a promise together for dinner.

>>Because I have no MBA class every Thursday, my co-workers then made an appointment for us to have dinner together.

Finally I was drunken.

>>Finally  I got drunk.
After dinner we went to song room in Gangnam, and then we had a time enjoyful.

>>After dinner we went to a singing room in Gangnam and we enjoyed it there.
Maybe I remembered sing a song \"Gangnam style\" because I like PSY.

>>I remember singing the song, \"Gangnam Style\" because I like Psy.
Okay. I am going to continue talking about experience in NewYork.

>>Correct.
I had arrived at homestay about 9 o\'clock p.m

>>Correct.
My room I would stay in homestay was decided by monster second floors.

>>The room that I would be staying in was on the second floor and this was decided by the monster.
I unpacked my materials which would be used in my room.

>>I unpacked the materials I would be using in my room.
Monster called me to go down to kichen in fist floor.

>>Thre monster called me to go down the kitchen on the first floor.
she and I sat on the table face to face, there was a map which was decribed method of going to Adelphi University in NewYork.

>>She and I sat on the table facing each other. There was a map showing how to get to the Adelphi University in New York.
She started to teach me about that,

>>Correct.

I saw outside through window on accident,
>>I glanced outside through the window by accident.

There were snowing so calmly.

>>It was snowing calmly.

See you Anne.

>>Correct.