hi, Aurora
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The main reason why I don't want Park Keun Hye to be next president is that she is the representative only for the privileged class. The party she is leading now doesn't support the average people in Korea. Besides this, I'm not sure if she's got qualification as a president. I hope we could have a qualified female president as you had one. :)
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I\'m not sure if you know, but the son of ex-president Corazon Aquino is also the current president of the Philippines right now. It seems politics runs in their blood. Well being a leader of a country is not a walk in the park. A president will always be critizised for everything. I hope we could have a strong and really smart leader in the Philippines too. Someone who would do something about the corruption in the government.
Talk to you more about this tomorrow.
T. Aurora
The main reason why I don\'t want Park Keun Hye to be next president is that she is the representative only for the privileged class.
>>The main reason why I don\'t want Park Keun Hye to be the next president is that she is the representative only of the privileged class.
The party she is leading now doesn\'t support the average people in Korea.
>>Correct!
Besides this, I\'m not sure if she\'s got qualification as a president.
>>Besides this, I\'m not sure if she has the qualifications to be a president.
>>Besides this, I\'m not sure if she\'s qualified to be a president.
I hope we could have a qualified female president as you had one. :)
>>Correct!
>>I hope we could have a qualified female president like in your country.
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