Hi, Aurora!

2012-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning! Thought i am writing this message at night Maybe you would check my H/W in the morning,right? First of all, i have solved the questions you gave me. c,d,a,b,b For a long time i had stopped the english class,because i had a lot of goals and target you wrote in Comment. Anyway, i have been tring to catch my target now, and i happy to restart this english class. Even we talked in short time, i thought you have a good teaching skill to develop my level. In this class, i want to know a variety of english expressions. I hope you fulfill my requst. Have a nice day and See you next class, Oh, sometimes i would be late to arrive at the office. Dont be angry. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It\'s not to hear from you this fine Wednesday morning. I\'m going to do my best to teach you and guide you through our course. Don\'t worry, I won\'t be mad when you\'ll be late. Stay safe and look forward to talking to you later. ^^ T. Aurora Good morning! >>Correct! Thought i am writing this message at night Maybe you would check my H/W in the morning,right? >>I am writing this message at night so maybe you\'d check my homework in the morning, right?First of all, i have solved the questions you gave me.>>First of all, I have solved the questions you gave me. (Capitalize \"I\") c,d,a,b,b >>c,d,a,a,bFor a long time i had stopped the english class,because i had a lot of goals and target you wrote in Comment. >>For a long time, I had stopped having English classes because I had a lot of goals and target which you wrote on the comment. Anyway, i have been tring to catch my target now, and i happy to restart this english class. >>Anyway, I have been trying to reach my target now, and I\'m happy to restart this English class. Even we talked in short time, i thought you have a good teaching skill to develop my level. >>Even if we talked for a short time, I thought you have a good teaching skill to develop my level.  In this class, i want to know a variety of english expressions. >>In this class, I want to know a variety of English expressions. I hope you fulfill my requst. >>I hope you\'d fulfill my request.Have a nice day and See you next class, >>Have a nice day and see you next class. Oh, sometimes i would be late to arrive at the office. >>Oh! Sometimes I would be late to arrive at the office. Dont be angry. ^^ >>Correct!

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