Hi Aurora,
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon! Thank you for nice class yesterday and today.
we discussed the company which is famous now in Korea but my explanation was not enought. So i explain about this company more.
This company' name is Jennifersoft. They povide computer system service. They have been famous not the size of company but providing a lot of benefit for employees. For example, there is a swimming pool, garden, kitchen, kindergarden in the company, they have enough vacation, support of studing abroad, concert and ordinary party for emplooyes. This company's owner has unique mind. He thought employees are partner of company and the most important for company is autonomy and happiness of employees. He said they can show their talent in these situation and company helps they have own valiue in life. thanks for this owner's mind, this company has been very famous, a lot of people want to work in there.
강사 첨삭
This company is amazing. People who put a lot of importance on their employees are very rare. The benefits the employees get there are simply unbelievable. I didn\'t think such a company exist. I would love to work for that company too. Hopefully they\'d make a Philippines branch. I\'d be one of the first people to apply.
T. Aurora
Good afternoon!
>>Correct!
Thank you for nice class yesterday and today.
>>Thank you for the nice class yesterday and today.we discussed the company which is famous now in Korea but my explanation was not enought.
>>We discussed about the company which is famous now in Korea but my explanation was not enough.
So i explain about this company more.
>>So let me explain about this company more.This company\' name is Jennifersoft.
>>The company\'s name is Jennifersoft.
They povide computer system service.
>>They provide computer system service.
They have been famous not the size of company but providing a lot of benefit for employees.
>>They have been famous not for the size of thecompany but for providing a lot of benefits for employees.
For example, there is a swimming pool, garden, kitchen, kindergarden in the company, they have enough vacation, support of studing abroad, concert and ordinary party for emplooyes.
>>For example, there is a swimming pool, garden, kitchen, kindergarten in the company, they have enough vacation, support for studying abroad, concert and ordinary party for emplooyes.
This company\'s owner has unique mind.
>>This company\'s owner has a unique mind.
He thought employees are partner of company and the most important for company is autonomy and happiness of employees.
>> He thinks the employees are partners of the company and the most important in a company is autonomy and happiness of employees.
He said they can show their talent in these situation and company helps they have own valiue in life.
>> He said they can show their talent in these situation and the company helps them have their own value in life.
thanks for this owner\'s mind, this company has been very famous, a lot of people want to work in there.
>>Thanks to this owner\'s way of thinking, this company has been very famous and a lot of people want to work there.
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