Hi Aurora,

Good afternoon, I was happy to see you in the class on time. Well, i l go to work same time everyday, my arrival time depends on the traffic condition ^^. I put some sentenses i wrote by mail at work. Check corrections and show me good expression please, Take care!! I write what we was talking on phone one more clearly  1. Storage charge depends on the volume and free date in our facility is 14days(maximum days) 2. Our facility is located in 7thwharf in Busan. 3. Yang-san is city near the Busan, distance is like between Seoul and Incheon. 4. Inventory Checking fee is fixed(carton $70, wooden $100). If repacking is needed, we add the Repacking fee(at cost + 10%). 5. Ocean freight also is charged At cost, included other Local charge. 6. We can’t check the weight of cargo, there is no weight machine in WHS. If you have any idea, send reply please. Especially, send me important things by mail, not for misunderstanding, please.

Hello there! I appreciate your effort in sending over your homework tonight. But I guess we still need to work on some of your sentence structuring. I would be more than glad to let you know about your corrections. If you have further questions please feel free to send them over, so will discuss them in class. See you tomorrow! ;) ~T. Aurora^^ Here are my corrections for you: Good afternoon, I was happy to see you in the class on time. >> Correct >> Good afternoon, I was happy to see you in class on time. Well, i l go to work same time everyday, my arrival time depends on the traffic condition ^^. >> Correct >> Well, i\'ll go to work same time everyday, my arrival time depends on the traffic condition.^^ I put some sentenses i wrote by mail at work. >> I put some sentences i wrote though the mail at work. Check corrections and show me good expression please, Take care!!>> Kindly check the the sentences and show me the correct expressions please? Take Care!! I write what we was talking on phone one more clearly >> I wrote down what he was talking on the phone more clearly. 1. Storage charge depends on the volume and free date in our facility is 14days(maximum days)>> Correct 2. Our facility is located in 7thwharf in Busan.>> DID YOU MEAN: Our facility is located at 7th floor in Busan. 3. Yang-san is city near the Busan, distance is like between Seoul and Incheon.>> Yang-san is a city near Busan, the distance is the same between Seoul and Incheon. 4. Inventory Checking fee is fixed(carton $70, wooden $100). >> Correct If repacking is needed, we add the Repacking fee(at cost + 10%).>> Correct 5. Ocean freight also is charged At cost, included other Local charge.>> Ocean freight also is charged at cost, including other local charges. 6. We can’t check the weight of cargo, there is no weight machine in WHS.>> We can\'t check the weight of the cargo, since there is no weight machine in WHS. If you have any idea, send reply please.>> If you have any questions, please send in your queries. Especially, send me important things by mail, not for misunderstanding, please. >> Kindly send important information and queries through the mail to avaid further inconvinence.