Hi Aurora,

2013-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Today is a happy and busy monday ^^ I am sorry to be absent the class today, as you know, every monday traffic condition is terrible. I was late for the class 10 minute. I hope I dont be late again next monday. How was in weekend? I went geting a massage with girl friend. It is a first time in Korea. when i was in the Pilippines, i used to go to massage once an month, or after exersising heavy sports. After massaging, I felt so fresh and relex until now. I will go massaging next time frequently. and i write the answer of homework. 1. see 2. look 3. watch 4. watch 5. see 6. see 7. looks 8. see 9. look 10. see Have a nice day and take care! Jong soon

강사 첨삭

Good day Jong soon! I didn\'t know your Korean name is Jong soon . My weekend was great. I worked during the weekend too then went to the gym to exercise. I also watched some drama series on my computer so my eyes are so tired staring at my computer screen for a long time. Above all, I ate a lot of delicious food. I think I spent most of my money already. I feel bad about it :(  Anyway, thanks for sending in this composition. I\'ll talk to you tomorrow then. T. Aurora Today is a happy and busy monday ^^ >>Today is a happy and busy Monday. ^^I am sorry to be absent the class today, as you know, every monday traffic condition is terrible. >>I am sorry for being absent on our class today. As you know, every Monday the traffic condition is terrible.  I was late for the class 10 minute. >> I was late for the class for 10 minutes.  I hope I dont be late again next monday. >> I hope I won\'t be late again next Monday. How was in weekend? >>How was your weekend? I went geting a massage with girl friend. >>I went to get a massage with my girl friend.  It is a first time in Korea. >>It is my first time in Korea. when i was in the Pilippines, i used to go to massage once an month, or after exersising heavy sports. >>When I was in the Philippines, I used to have a massage once a month, or after doing heavy sports. After massaging, I felt so fresh and relex until now. >>After the massage, I feel fresh and relaxed until now.  I will go massaging next time frequently. >>I will have a massage more frequently next time.and i write the answer of homework. >>I wrote down my answers to the homework.1. see >>Correct!  2. look >>Correct! 3. watch >>Correct! 4. watch >>Correct! 5. see >>Correct!  6. see >>Correct! 7. looks >>Correct!  8. see >>Correct! 9. look >>Correct! 10. see>>Correct!Have a nice day and take care! >>Correct!Jong soon >>Correct!

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