Hi Aurora,
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is a happy and busy monday ^^
I am sorry to be absent the class today, as you know, every monday traffic condition is terrible. I was late for the class 10 minute. I hope I dont be late again next monday.
How was in weekend? I went geting a massage with girl friend. It is a first time in Korea. when i was in the Pilippines, i used to go to massage once an month, or after exersising heavy sports. After massaging, I felt so fresh and relex until now. I will go massaging next time frequently.
and i write the answer of homework.
1. see 2. look 3. watch 4. watch 5. see 6. see 7. looks 8. see 9. look 10. see
Have a nice day and take care!
Jong soon
강사 첨삭
Good day Jong soon! I didn\'t know your Korean name is Jong soon . My weekend was great. I worked during the weekend too then went to the gym to exercise. I also watched some drama series on my computer so my eyes are so tired staring at my computer screen for a long time. Above all, I ate a lot of delicious food. I think I spent most of my money already. I feel bad about it :( Anyway, thanks for sending in this composition. I\'ll talk to you tomorrow then.
T. Aurora
Today is a happy and busy monday ^^
>>Today is a happy and busy Monday. ^^I am sorry to be absent the class today, as you know, every monday traffic condition is terrible.
>>I am sorry for being absent on our class today. As you know, every Monday the traffic condition is terrible.
I was late for the class 10 minute.
>> I was late for the class for 10 minutes.
I hope I dont be late again next monday.
>> I hope I won\'t be late again next Monday.
How was in weekend?
>>How was your weekend?
I went geting a massage with girl friend.
>>I went to get a massage with my girl friend.
It is a first time in Korea.
>>It is my first time in Korea.
when i was in the Pilippines, i used to go to massage once an month, or after exersising heavy sports.
>>When I was in the Philippines, I used to have a massage once a month, or after doing heavy sports.
After massaging, I felt so fresh and relex until now.
>>After the massage, I feel fresh and relaxed until now.
I will go massaging next time frequently.
>>I will have a massage more frequently next time.and i write the answer of homework.
>>I wrote down my answers to the homework.1. see
>>Correct!
2. look
>>Correct!
3. watch
>>Correct!
4. watch
>>Correct!
5. see
>>Correct!
6. see
>>Correct!
7. looks
>>Correct!
8. see
>>Correct!
9. look
>>Correct!
10. see>>Correct!Have a nice day and take care!
>>Correct!Jong soon >>Correct!
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