HI Aurora
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I also try to exercise at Gym not to be laze and have a good body shape. When I started to go to the gym, I hasitate to enter the gym in front of the door. Now, I feel so strange if I dont exercise after working. It has passed only 2 weeks, but I believe that the steady exercise may gives me a great reward finally. ^^
Today we discussed about fortune teller. There are a lot of fortune tellers in korea. Fortune teller, superstition and shaman is a part of the traditional culture in Korea and they have affected the people's life. Even though These have a side effect, it would not be disappeared. At now, almost dosent accept thire advise seriously, they go to them just for fun.
I wrote down the answer, check please and see you next class..
1. than 2.than 3. then 4. then 5. then 6. then 7. than 8. then 9. than 10. then
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Working out everyday would definitely do you a lot of good. Try not to get yourself injured though.
You have no idea how popular fortune tellers are in the Philippines. But that\'s a topic we could discuss tomorrow.
Keep cool and see you tomorrow!
T. Aurora
I also try to exercise at Gym not to be laze and have a good body shape.
>>I also try to exercise at the gym to have a good body shape and not to be lazy.
When I started to go to the gym, I hasitate to enter the gym in front of the door.
>>When I first went to the gym, I hesitated to enter the gym in front of the door.
Now, I feel so strange if I dont exercise after working.
>>Correct!
It has passed only 2 weeks, but I believe that the steady exercise may gives me a great reward finally. ^^
>>It has only 2 weeks, but I believe that steady exercise may give a great reward some day.Today we discussed about fortune teller.
>>Today, we discussed about fortune tellers.
There are a lot of fortune tellers in korea.
>>There are a lot of fortune tellers in Korea.
Fortune teller, superstition and shaman is a part of the traditional culture in Korea and they have affected the people\'s life.
>>Fortune tellers, superstitions and shamans are a part of the traditional culture of Korea and they have affected the people\'s life.
Even though These have a side effect, it would not be disappeared.
>>Even though these have a bad side effect, it still won\'t disappear.
At now, almost dosent accept thire advise seriously, they go to them just for fun.
>>Nowadays, most people don\'t take their advice seriously. They just go to them for fun.I wrote down the answer, check please and see you next class..
>>Correct!1. than
>>Correct!
2.than
>>Correct!
3. then
>>Correct!
4. then
>>than
5. then
>>Correct!
6. then
>>Correct!
7. than
>>Correct!
8. then
>>Correct!
9. than
>>Correct!
10. then
>>Correct!
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