Hi Aurora

2013-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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It is freazing cold weather today but feeling is good. I am sorry to be late for class. I had a meeting with friend after work, and we teached our own language each other. It was an hour, but I felt so tired. After that, I went to the gym as asual and excercised an hour and harf. Nomarlly I get a good feeling and condition, but, I was exhausted and was not able to focus on fitness yesterday! I think it was caused by studying. it is most hard excersize. Anyway, I write down the answer as usual. 1. what 2. which 3. which 4. what 5. which 6. which 7. what 8. which 9. what 10. what Have a good saturday and sunday, I will hope we will see on monday. I will try it. See you

강사 첨삭

I do hope that you would really be able to attend class on Monday.  Though, I also understand the traffic conditions in your country. Keep warm this day especially this weekend. See you! T. Aurora It is freazing cold weather today but feeling is good. >>It is freezing cold today but I\'m feeling good. >>It is freezing cold today but it feels good.I am sorry to be late for class. >>I\'m sorry for being late for class.  I had a meeting with friend after work, and we teached our own language each other. >>I had a meeting with a friend after work and we taught each other our own language. It was an hour, but I felt so tired. >>It was only for an hour but I fels so tired. After that, I went to the gym as asual and excercised an hour and harf. >>After that, I went to the gym as asual and excercised for an hour and half. Nomarlly I get a good feeling and condition, but, I was exhausted and was not able to focus on fitness yesterday! >>Normally, I get a good feeling and condition but I was exhausted and was not able to focus on my fitness yesterday. I think it was caused by studying. it is most hard excersize. >>I think it was caused by too much studying. It was harder than excercising. Anyway, I write down the answer as usual. >>Anyway, I wrote down the answer as usual.1. what >>Correct! 2. which >>Correct! 3. which >>Correct! 4. what >>Correct! 5. which >>Correct! 6. which >>Correct! 7. what >>Correct!  8. which >>Correct! 9. what >>Correct!  10. what >>Correct!Have a good saturday and sunday, I will hope we will see on monday. >>Have a good Saturday and Sunday, I hope to see you on Monday. I will try it. See you >>I will give it a try. See you.

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