HI Aurora.
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning! I had a good weekend on saturday and sunday. As I told you in the class, I had a memorial ceremony of aunt's husband. He passed away a long time ago. Maybe 25years ago? I don't have a memory about him, but aunt invite me and my mother to ceremony. she is a christian, so we prey for him and read the bible. After that, we went to the restaurant with her famaily for launch. she've got a son and daughter. I'm closed with them. We had a lot of conversation about our life and plan. It was precious time with them, because it is hard to have a time with them after being a adult. I think you also have a good weekend with your family and friends.
Homework.
1. I gave up winning the lottery after spending a lot of momey.
2. The most important thing in life is health and not forgetting our own dream.
3. Happiness is living with a smile.
강사 첨삭
Great job on answering your homework.
You\'re absolutely right! I did enjoy my weekend so much. I did the usualy things but it was still fun and productive. Talk to you tomorrow [이름]!
T. Aurora
Good morning!
>>Correct!
I had a good weekend on saturday and sunday.
>>I had a good weekend.
>>I had a good time last Saturday and Sunday.
As I told you in the class, I had a memorial ceremony of aunt\'s husband.
>>As I told you in the class, I had a memorial ceremony for my aunt\'s husband.
He passed away a long time ago.
>>Correct!
Maybe 25years ago?
>>It was probably 26 years ago.
I don\'t have a memory about him, but aunt invite me and my mother to ceremony.
>>I don\'t have any memories of him but my aunt invited me and my mother to the ceremony.
she is a christian, so we prey for him and read the bible.
>>She is a christian so we prayed for him and read the bible.
After that, we went to the restaurant with her famaily for launch.
>>After that, we went to a restaurant with her family for lunch.
she\'ve got a son and daughter.
>>She has a son and a daughter.
I\'m closed with them.
>>I\'m close with them.
We had a lot of conversation about our life and plan.
>>Correct!
It was precious time with them, because it is hard to have a time with them after being a adult.
>>It was a precious time with them because it is hard to have time with time after we became adults.
I think you also have a good weekend with your family and friends. >>I think you also had a good weekend with your family and friends.Homework.1. I gave up winning the lottery after spending a lot of momey.
>>Correct!2. The most important thing in life is health and not forgetting our own dream.
>>Correct!3. Happiness is living with a smile.
>>Correct!
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