HI Aurora.

2013-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Good morning! I had a good weekend on saturday and sunday. As I told you in the class, I had a memorial ceremony of aunt's husband. He passed away a long time ago. Maybe 25years ago? I don't have a memory about him, but aunt invite me and my mother to ceremony. she is a christian, so we prey for him and read the bible. After that, we went to the restaurant with her famaily for launch. she've got a son and daughter. I'm closed with them. We had a lot of conversation about our life and plan. It was precious time with them, because it is hard to have a time with them after being a adult. I think you also have a good weekend with your family and friends. Homework. 1. I gave up winning the lottery after spending a lot of momey. 2. The most important thing in life is health and not forgetting our own dream. 3. Happiness is living with a smile.

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Great job on answering your homework. You\'re absolutely right! I did enjoy my weekend so much. I did the usualy things but it was still fun and productive.  Talk to you tomorrow [이름]! T. Aurora Good morning! >>Correct! I had a good weekend on saturday and sunday. >>I had a good weekend. >>I had a good time last Saturday and Sunday. As I told you in the class, I had a memorial ceremony of aunt\'s husband. >>As I told you in the class, I had a memorial ceremony for my aunt\'s husband. He passed away a long time ago. >>Correct! Maybe 25years ago? >>It was probably 26 years ago.  I don\'t have a memory about him, but aunt invite me and my mother to ceremony. >>I don\'t have any memories of him but my aunt invited me and my mother to the ceremony. she is a christian, so we prey for him and read the bible. >>She is a christian so we prayed for him and read the bible. After that, we went to the restaurant with her famaily for launch. >>After that, we went to a restaurant with her family for lunch. she\'ve got a son and daughter. >>She has a son and a daughter.  I\'m closed with them. >>I\'m close with them.  We had a lot of conversation about our life and plan. >>Correct! It was precious time with them, because it is hard to have a time with them after being a adult. >>It was a precious time with them because it is hard to have time with time after we became adults. I think you also have a good weekend with your family and friends. >>I think you also had a good weekend with your family and friends.Homework.1. I gave up winning the lottery after spending a lot of momey. >>Correct!2. The most important thing in life is health and not forgetting our own dream. >>Correct!3. Happiness is living with a smile. >>Correct!

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