Hi Aurora~^^ hw 1
학생이 쓴 원문
hi Aurora~
First of all, I am very happy to meet you as my new teacher.
Your clear pronounciation makes me understand our conversation well^^
I am really expecting to study with you the following days.
Plus, I am going to try to write an essay everyday^^
anyway, see you^^
1) I talked to the girl whose car had broken down in front of the shop.
2) Mr. [Name], who is a taxi driver, lives on the corner.
3) We often visit our aunt in Norwich which is in East Anglia.
4) This is the girl who comes from Spain.
5) That's Peter, the boy who has just arrived at the airport.
6) Thank you very much for your e-mail which was very interesting.
7) The man, whose father is a professor, forgot his umbrella.
8) The children, who shouted in the street, are not from our school.
9) The car, whose driver is a [이름] man, is from Ireland.
10) What did you do with the money which your mother lent you?
강사 첨삭
Hello Doris! It\'s trully a pleasure meeting you as well. You surprised me in how well you write. Your sentences are complete just don\'t forget your punctuation marks and capitalization of words. You were also able to answer the homework perfectly. Well done! Well I\'m looking forward to our classes as well. Sounds like we\'re going to have lots of fun. Well keep your compositions coming. I\'d be very glad to check them. Ciao!
T. Aurora
hi Aurora~
>>Hi Aurora, First of all, I am very happy to meet you as my new teacher.
>>Correct!Your clear pronounciation makes me understand our conversation well^^
>>Your clear pronunciation helps me understand our conversation well. ^^I am really expecting to study with you the following days.
>>I am really looking forward to studying with you the following days.Plus, I am going to try to write an essay everyday^^
>>Correct!anyway, see you^^
>>Anyway, see you. ^^1) I talked to the girl whose car had broken down in front of the shop.
>>Correct!2) Mr. [Name], who is a taxi driver, lives on the corner.
>>Correct!3) We often visit our aunt in Norwich which is in East Anglia.
>>Correct!4) This is the girl who comes from Spain.
>>Correct!5) That\'s Peter, the boy who has just arrived at the airport.
>>Correct!6) Thank you very much for your e-mail which was very interesting.
>>Correct!7) The man, whose father is a professor, forgot his umbrella.
>>Correct!8) The children, who shouted in the street, are not from our school.
>>Correct!9) The car, whose driver is a [이름] man, is from Ireland.
>>Correct!10) What did you do with the money which your mother lent you?
>>Correct!
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