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2014-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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Good morning ^..^ very beautiful fall morning ! I would appriciate it if you could check my english writing out. Han Gul . in the heart of the world's character . That is Hun MIn Jung UM( the korean script) used to be called the miraclous charater . Because that is only Han Gul in the heart of the world's character know who did make it and the date of publication and know how to make it. There is not this kind of character in the world. Han Gul . exactly speaking . Hun Min Jung UM Hae Rae Bon (a national treasure ) is recorded in UNESCO as a world record inheritance. The name of Han Gul. the teacher Ju Si Kyeong and other scholer started to use . Han means large and great so Han Gul means very great character.

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Hello Miss. [Name]!   Thanks for sending in this one. Feel free to review it if I was able to correct it properly. I am really not familiar with the Korean script and its history. kkkk It sounds interesting though.   See you in class!   ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections:   Good morning ^..^ very beautiful fall morning ! >> Good morning! It\'s a very beautiful fall morning.I would appriciate it if you could check my english writing out.>> I would appreciate it if you will check my English composition.Han Gul . in the heart of the world\'s character . That is Hun MIn Jung UM( the korean script) used to be called the miraclous charater . >> DO YOU MEAN: Han Gul, which is also known as the \'heart of the world\'s characters\', is also said to be identified as Min Jung EUM. It was formerly known as the \"miraculous characters\".Because that is only Han Gul in the heart of the world\'s character know who did make it and the date of publication and know how to make it. >> DO YOU MEAN: But only Han Gul is known for its publication, its publishers, and how it\'s used.There is not this kind of character in the world. >> These characters are one of a kind.Han Gul . exactly speaking . Hun Min Jung UM Hae Rae Bon (a national treasure ) is recorded in UNESCO as a world record inheritance. >> DO YOU MEAN: Han Gul is used for communication, while Hun Min Jung EUM is considered to be a national treasure. It even holds a record in UNESCO as a world inheritance. The name of Han Gul. the teacher Ju Si Kyeong and other scholer started to use . >> DO YOU MEAN: Ju Si Kyeong, a teacher, started using Han Gul along with other scholars. Han means large and great so Han Gul means very great character.  >> Han means \"large\" and \"great\", so I think Han Gul is a great set of characters.

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