Hi, Brian teacher!

2018-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Brian teacher! First, I didn\'t know that my voice heard to gloomy. Actually, Today is monday and monday is the most busy-day of the week. Besides, I got scolded by the boss of the other team. That is why i refuse the other team\'s request. Honestly, I\'m very angry on the situation. But i had to apologize to him. Simply because he is the boss. But i never knew my voice would be that. And I\'m sorry for not doing my homework. Can i do this homework tomorrow? Give me a chance please~ See you next class ! Good night!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank you for letting me know of the situation
it\'s ok to be upset but in time you\'ll be fine
take care, see you on our next class ^^


Teacher Brian




Hi, Brian teacher!
>>Hi Teacher Brian,

First, I didn\'t know that my voice heard to gloomy.
>> I didn\'t know that I sound gloomy 

Actually, Today is Monday and Monday is the most busy-day of the week.
>>Today is Monday and Monday is the most toxic day of the week 

Besides, I got scolded by the boss of the other team.
>> I got scolded by the supervisor of the other team 

That is why i refuse the other team\'s request.
>> That\'s why I refuse the other team\'s request 

Honestly, I\'m very angry on the situation.
>> Honestly, I\'m very mad because of the situation 

But i had to apologize to him.
>> But I have to apologize to him 

Simply because he is the boss.
>>CORRECT

But i never knew my voice would be that And I\'m sorry for not doing my homework.
>> I wasn\'t aware that my tone of voice is like that and I\'m sorry for not doing my homework 

Can i do this homework tomorrow? Give me a chance please~
>>Can i do this homework tomorrow? Give me a chance to finish my homework please, 

See you next class ! Good night!

>>See you on our next class, Good night!

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