Hi Cam

I'm sorry for the absence at this class yesterday. As I told you my son was sick with a cold and my wife was exhausted by taking care of my son. So I got off from work early yesterday than normal days. I went to the hospital with my son and then I played with my children. I took my children to sleep. I was so tired that I could not get up to bed. He has a temperature yet when I checked the temperature of my son in the morning. I'm worried about his health. I hope he get better quickly.

Hello Dear!

Thank you for making a composition. I hope your son will get well soon. Take care. See you in class.

T.Camille

Here are your corrections:

I'm sorry for the absence at this class yesterday.

>>I뭢 sorry for being absent yesterday.
As I told you my son was sick with a cold and my wife was exhausted by taking care of my son.

>>Correct!
So I got off from work early yesterday than normal days.

>>Correct!
I went to the hospital with my son and then I played with my children.

>>I brought my son to the hospital. After that, I played with my children.
I took my children to sleep.

>>I put my children to sleep.

I was so tired that I could not get up to bed.

>>I was so tired that I could not get up from bed.
He has a temperature yet when I checked the temperature of my son in the morning.

>>When I checked the temperature of my son this morning, he still has fever.
I'm worried about his health.

>>Correct!
I hope he get better quickly.

>>I hope he gets better soon.