Hi Cam
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Thank so much for your concern to my daughter on last night.
Hopefully, It seems that she got better than yesterday.
But she still has a little fever.
So I think I will have to check her fever contiguously.
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Hi there Mr [이름]!
Thank you for this composition.I just hope your daughter will get well .
Teacher Camille
Thank so much for your concern to my daughter on last night.
>>Thank so much for your concern to my daughter last night.
Hopefully, It seems that she got better than yesterday.
>>Hopefully, she would get better than yesterday.
But she still has a little fever.
>>But she still has a slight fever.
So I think I will have to check her fever contiguously.
>>So I think,I will have to check her fever continuously.
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