Hi Cam!
학생이 쓴 원문
It is sunny today.^^
I'm sorry for being absent yesterday.
I got off from work early yesterday than normal days.
I played with my children at my home and I felt down on the bed with my children..
I was so tired that I could not get up from bed.
I hope to see you later.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr [이름]!
Thank you for this composition.I'll talk to you later in class ^_^
Teacher Camille
It is sunny today.^^
>>correctI'm sorry for being absent yesterday.>>correct
I got off from work early yesterday than normal days.
>>Yesterday, I got off from work earlier than usual.I played with my children at my home and I felt down on the bed with my children..
>>I played with my children at home and I laid down on the bed with my children.
I was so tired that I could not get up from bed.
>>correctI hope to see you later.^^
>>correct
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