Hi Cam
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm sorry for being absent yesterday.
I was tired and I could not get up.
I think my children seem sleeping pills.^^
Because I can't get up when lay down on the bed with my children.
The late summer heat was much worse than usual last week before.
So I had to put on summer clothes and turn on the air conditioner at home.
But The weather is very changeful these days.
So I have to put on my overcoat when go out and take care of my children's health.
How's weather in you country?
I hope you be careful.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Mr. [이름],
I wanna say thank you for the composition you sent me.
Im glad to hear that you always spend time with your kids.
Anyway, I'll talk to you again later..
be happy always..:)
T.Cam
I'm sorry for being absent yesterday.
>>correct!
>>Im so sorry for not attending the class yesterday.I was tired and I could not get up.
>>correct!I think my children seem sleeping pills.^^
>>I think my children seem to be my sleeping pills.
>>I think my children are my sleeping pills.Because I can't get up when lay down on the bed with my children.
>>correct!The late summer heat was much worse than usual last week before.
>>The late summer heat was much worse than the usual last week.So I had to put on summer clothes and turn on the air conditioner at home.
>>correct!But The weather is very changeful these days.
>>But the weather keeps on changing these days.So I have to put on my overcoat when go out and take care of my children's health.
>>So I have to put on my coat when I go out and take care of my children's health.How's weather in you country?
>>How's the weather in your country?I hope you be careful.
>>I hope that you would take care of yourself.
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