Hi Cam
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I had a long holiday.
I took a rest at home with my family.
My daughter wanted to go outside. She just wanted to play with block at home.
By contrast my son wanted to go outside. He wanted to ride bicycle outside.
So I confused because of this on holidays.
I don't know why my daughter dislike going outside these days.
I'm worried because of my daughter.
I hope that she like going outside.
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Hello Mr. [이름],
Happy Tuesday?kkk...
Thank you so much for the compositino you sent me..
Its nice to know that you had a wonderful weekend with your family..
Talk to you later my dear..
T.Cam
I had a long holiday.
>>correct!I took a rest at home with my family.
>>correct!My daughter wanted to go outside. She just wanted to play with block at home.
>>My daughter wanted to go outside. She just wanted to play with blocks at home.By contrast my son wanted to go outside. He wanted to ride bicycle outside.
>>By contrast my son wanted to go outside. He wanted to ride bicycle outside.So I confused because of this on holidays.>>So I was confused because of my long holiday.I don't know why my daughter dislike going outside these days.
>>I dont know why my daughter dislikes going outisde these days.I'm worried because of my daughter.
>>correct!I hope that she like going outside
>>I hope that she will like going outside.
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