Hi Cam

Happy Sunday. It is long time on here. How is the weather in your country? It is getting colder and colder in Korea. Of course, most of people like the fall. but I don't like the fall. Because I always take the bus early in the morning, in the late night. and then, I am so cold for waiting the bus. What do you think of my situation?

Hello Dear! Thank you for making a composition. We will talk about it in class. See you! T.Camille Here are your corrections: Happy Sunday. >>Happy Wednesday. It is long time on here. >>It's been a long time.How is the weather in your country? >>Correct!It is getting colder and colder in Korea. >>Correct!Of course, most of people like the fall. but I don't like the fall. >>Of course, most people like Fall, but I don't like it.Because I always take the bus early in the morning, in the late night. and then, I am so cold for waiting the bus. >>Because I always take the bus early in the morning and late at night, and I feel cold standing while waiting for the bus.What do you think of my situation? >>Correct!