Hi Cam

2011-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

The autumn sky is so high an blue. There is not a cloud in the deep blue sky. I feel tried of studying in English these days. I not sure that my grade get better even thought I have studied in English for some years. I feel like being difficult to study in English more and more. Actually, I still can hear a small part of your speaking and can speak a small part of my thought. Do I get better than before, Really? Could you advise to me about this?

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mr.[이름], Thank you so much for dropping in your composition today.^^ I understand what you feel. Actually, its not really that easy to study English, but if you have the will to do it, I know, you can really do it Mr. [이름]. I believe in you..I believe in your skills.. You are good and you actually improved your skills, but since you're working, sometimes I notice that youre a bit tired when having our class. And that would be a challenge in your part.. Just be positive Mr. [이름] and be confident in speaking.. With that, I know everything will be in the right place..Just believe in yourself Mr.[이름].. Dont be upset Mr.[이름], Im always here for and Im more than willing to help you improve your skills..Cheer up...You can do that! T.Cam   The autumn sky is so high an blue. >>The autumn sky is so high and blue.There is not a cloud in the deep blue sky. >>There are no clouds in the deep blue sky.I feel tried of studying in English these days. >>I feel tired of studying English nowadays.I not sure that my grade get better even thought I have studied in English for some years. >>Im not sure if Im improving my skills even though Ive studied English for so many years.I feel like being difficult to study in English more and more. >>Im having a difficult time studying English.Actually, I still can hear a small part of your speaking and can speak a small part of my thought. >>Actually, I can comprehend a bit of what you're saying and all I can say is a bit of my ideas.Do I get better than before, Really? >>Can you be honest with me? Am I really improving?Could you advise to me about this? >>Could you advise me about this?  

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