Hi^^ Cam... TBIT...
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sir Hochan!^^
I really love the way you greeted me... TBIT!hehehe...
By the way, thank you once again for making my day really great by doing this composition...
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again my dear...
Take care always...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
HI^^ Cam.. How about my greeting?
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OR: How do you like my greeting?
\" TBIT\"\" It means that thanks buddha it is a tuesday.. haha... because i am a buddhist..
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OR: TBIT means Thanks Buddha it\'s Tuesday, hahaha!Because I am a Buddhist.
It is getting colder and colder.
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daytime is becoming shorter and shorter.
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on sunday, i watched the tv program \" Finland travel\" it was about the beauty of Finland and the life in the cold region.
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OR: Last Sunday, I watched the TV program entitled Finland Travel which is about the beauty of Finland and the life in the cold region.
i have a kinds of fantasy about living in the very, very cold land, like a polar region. so fantastic,, right??
>>I have a kind of fantasy living in an extreme cold place like polar region, fantastic right?^^
i should sleep in the igloo with the fur coat..
>>I should sleep in an igloo with a fur coat.
i can hear the sound of winter wind. hahaha
>>I can feel the cold wind.Hahahaha
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