Hi^^ Cam... TBIT...

2014-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

HI^^ Cam.. How about my greeting? " TBIT"" It means that thanks buddha it is a tuesday.. haha... because i am a buddhist.. it is getting colder and colder. daytime is becoming shorter and shorter. on sunday, i watched the tv program " Finland travel" it was about the beauty of Finland and the life in the cold region. i have a kinds of fantasy about living in the very, very cold land, like a polar region. so fantastic,, right?? i should sleep in the igloo with the fur coat.. i can hear the sound of winter wind. hahaha

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir Hochan!^^
I really love the way you greeted me... TBIT!hehehe...

By the way, thank you once again for making my day really great by doing this composition...

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again my dear...

Take care always...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

HI^^ Cam.. How about my greeting? 

>>correct

OR: How do you like my greeting?

\" TBIT\"\" It means that thanks buddha it is a tuesday.. haha... because i am a buddhist.. 

>>correct

OR: TBIT means Thanks Buddha it\'s Tuesday, hahaha!Because I am a Buddhist.

 It is getting colder and colder.

>>correct

daytime is becoming shorter and shorter. 

>>correct

on sunday, i watched the tv program \" Finland travel\" it was about the beauty of Finland and the life in the cold region.

>>correct

OR: Last Sunday, I watched the TV program entitled Finland Travel which is about the beauty of Finland and the life in the cold region.

i have a kinds of fantasy about living in the very, very cold land, like a polar region. so fantastic,, right?? 

>>I have a kind of fantasy living in an extreme cold place like polar region, fantastic right?^^

i should sleep in the igloo with the fur coat.. 

>>I should sleep in an igloo with a fur coat.

i can hear the sound of winter wind. hahaha

>>I can feel the cold wind.Hahahaha

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