hi Camille

2012-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hi my teacher! i'm Jenny, as well as Eva. haha. i gotta choose a name that i'll use continuously. but i don't know which name is more suitable for me. that two names are so opposite side and difficult to selecting a name. which name is better you think!? and i'm sorry to write down your name as Camilie a few days ago. i'll never take a mistake like this. and one more, i'm not that tired. i think you supposed that i'm very exhausted because of working. i'm okay and thank you to say take a rest and take care every day. and i decided reducing days that i don't go to part time job. what a nice~ yesterday, i finished our talk and i was scheduled to meet my boyfried, so i didn't do the homework. i and my boyfriend went to BBQ restaurant and ate some meat with beer. i love meat and arcohol drinks, so ate and drank fully. i was so happy....oh.. suddenly i get hungry...i don't have a dinner yet, i should eat something. bye this is homework including yesterday's B A C C A / A B A A B

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Hello my dear Jenny/Eva,hehehe.. Thank you so much for taking your time in writing a composition. Actually, I\'m always excited to have class with you because you are such a very energetic, outgoing and smart lady. It\'s always a pleasure to me talking to you.. I\'m also happy to hear that you reduced the day of your part time job, and now you will be able to take a rest. ANd about your name baby, either way around is really good. But I really love your name Eva, I told you before it sounds so SEXY! But Jenny is also very good, the thing is just a lot of students are already using Jenny but that\'s good too..Your call baby..:) Cant wai to talk to you again tomorrow my dear.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hi my teacher! i\'m Jenny as well as Eva haha. >>correct i gotta choose a name that i\'ll use continuously. >>correct but i don\'t know which name is more suitable for me. >>correct that two names are so opposite side and difficult to selecting a name. >>correct which name is better you think!? >>correctand i\'m sorry to write down your name as Camilie a few days ago. >>correcti\'ll never take a mistake like this. >>correctand one more, i\'m not that tired. >>correct i think you supposed that i\'m very exhausted because of working. >>correct i\'m okay and thank you to say take a rest and take care every day. >>correct and i decided reducing days that i don\'t go to part time job. what a nice~>>And I decided to reduce the day of my part time job. That\'s nice!yesterday, i finished our talk and i was scheduled to meet my boyfried, so i didn\'t do the homework. >>correct i and my boyfriend went to BBQ restaurant and ate some meat with beer. >>correct i love meat and arcohol drinks, so ate and drank fully. i was so happy....oh.. suddenly i get hungry...i don\'t have a dinner yet, i should eat something. bye>>I love to eat meat and drink alcohol. I was so happy because I was so full..kkk..ANd oh suddenl I got hungry again. I didn\'t have my dinner yet so I should eat something firs. Bye.B A C C A / A B A A B >>correct

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