hi cara

2011-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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hi cara it was very nice with you yesterday! today is sunny but the sky gets windy, as if it is just like a winter i can`t speak in english well but i feel get better day by day i owe you cara ^^* i yet feel uneasy about english before you call me but, now i feel comfortable in english with you anyways . i have first date with my boyfriend today.ㅎㅎ so i am so delight and i am just exciting ㅎㅎ finally .. you have a good day.. i love cara ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:) Thank you for the wonderful composition. It's nice to know that you're feeling that way. Don't worry, we'll be having more exercises that will help you enhance your English skills. For now, enjoy your day with you boyfriend:) Take care!   hi cara>>Hi Karla!it was very nice with you yesterday!>>It was nice talking with you yesterday.today is sunny but the sky gets windy, as if it is just like a winter>>Today is sunny but windy as if it's just like winter.i can`t speak in english well but i feel get better day by day>>I can't speak English well but I feel I'm getting better everyday.i owe you cara ^^*>>I owe it to you Karla.^^i yet feel uneasy about english before you call me >>I feel uneasy about English before not until you called me. but, now i feel comfortable in english with you >>but now, I feel comfortable speaking in English with you. anyways . i have first date with my boyfriend today.ㅎㅎ >>Anyway, I have my first date with my boyfriend today. so i am so delight and i am just exciting ㅎㅎ >>So I am so delightful and excited. finally .. you have a good day.. i love cara ^^ >>Lastly, have a good day. I love  Karla. ^^

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