hi~~chef~~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
^^
This morning, I heard that you cooked something for your boyfriend in weekend.
Wow It's awesome~~~
You are a chef~! ^^
Actually I didn't cook ever except 'Kimbob'which is a cuisine very easy to make.
I don't like chores including cooking.
Even I didn't konw how to work a washing machine.
When my boyfriend heard that fact, he was very surprised.
uh...I should not have told him. he looked like disappointed with me.
I think that house work is not difficult thing to learn.
Once I decide to try that work I'll be used to it.
Is it a poor excuse? huhuhuhu
anyway I hate cooking. ^^
That's why I called you a chef and I admired.
Have a nice day~~~*^^*
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Good morning!!! My co teachers told me that I was blushing while I am checking your composition. Why? It's because you called me a chef. Honestly speaking, I am not that good at cooking. Like you, I don't like doing house chores too. Ha ha.. But I need to learn doing it since I lived independently. Actually, my boyfriend was the one who taught me how to cook. Maybe you can ask your boyfriend to teach you too. It will be fun plus you will be having a bonding time as well. See you on Wednesday J!!! Take care!!!
Lei J
^^This morning, I heard that you cooked something for your boyfriend during the weekend.>>correctWow It's awesome~~~>>correctYou are a chef~! ^^>>correctActually I didn't cook ever except for 'Kimbob' which is a Korean cuisine and very easy to make. >>correctI don't like chores including cooking.>>correctEven I didn't konw how to work a washing machine.>>I don't even know how to work with a washing machine.When my boyfriend heard that fact, he was very surprised.>>correctuh...I should not have told him.
>>correct
he looked like disappointed with me.>>it looked like he was disappointed with meI think that house work is not a difficult thing to learn.>>correctOnce I decide to try that work I'll be used to it.>>correctIs it a poor excuse? huhuhuhu>>correctanyway I hate cooking. ^^>>correctThat's why I called you a chef and I admired you.>>correctHave a nice day~~~*^^*
>>correct
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