Hi~Cherry.

2011-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 cherry

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, we talked about distinctive jewelries which I have. I would like to pronounce words 'oriental, ethnic, gypsy feeling jewelries' that I love. Maybe these words are rather difficult to make a sound for me. However, whenever I talk to you in our class, I feel happy. Tomorrow is the first day in June. In Korea, this summer is anticipated very hot and humid weather rather than last summer. Is summer climate of Philipine is hot and damp also? If so, maintaining healthy is an essential thing too in Philipne. Keep your health in good condition! Bye.

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Thank you so much for making the words clear to me [이름]! I really appreciate your effort about this. I want you to know that I also feel happy and satisfied everytime I talk to you through the telephone. I want to help and make more conversations with you, but as usual, time flies so fast. Well, I also hope for your best health. See you in class! ~cherry~   Today, we talked about distinctive jewelries which I have. >>correct >>OR: Today, we talked about distinctive jewelries which I possess. I would like to pronounce words 'oriental, ethnic, gypsy feeling jewelries' that I love. >>I would like to pronounce the words 'oriental, ethnic and gypsy feeling jewelries' that I love. Maybe these words are rather difficult to make a sound for me. >>Maybe these words are rather difficult for me to pronounce. >>OR: Maybe it's difficult for me to make the sounds of these words. However, whenever I talk to you in our class, I feel happy. >>correctTomorrow is the first day in June. >>correct >>OR: Tomorrow is the first day of June. In Korea, this summer is anticipated very hot and humid weather rather than last summer. >>In Korea, this summer is anticipated to be very hot and humid rather than the last summer. Is summer climate of Philipine is hot and damp also? >>Is the summer climate in Philippines hot and damp also? If so, maintaining healthy is an essential thing too in Philipne. >>If so, mainaining health is an essential thing too in Philippines. >>OR: If so, maintaining good health is an essential thing to do in Philippines. Keep your health in good condition! Bye. >>correct

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